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A Moment from Innocent to You by ~delusion-of-habit:icondelusion-of-habit:



Still innocent
I trace your skin
Still innocent
I caress your cheek
Still innocent
I find your pulse
Less innocent
You move closer
Less innocent
You turn your face to mine
Less innocent
You groan for another kiss
Now knowing
I kiss you long
Now knowing
I taste your skin
Now knowing
I explore you anew
I know now
Of your secret smile
I know now
Of your secret lust
I know now
Of your secret warmth
I値l never know
Of what you feel
I値l never know
If you want to work this out
I値l never know
If you could love me again
©2007-2009 ~delusion-of-habit
:icondelusion-of-habit:

Author's Comments

My poetical tag reply to 'Catching Rays' [link]
by BunnyFugger

Sorry to turn this around at the end but I had to be honest as its based on real stuff.

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Please don't take credit for my or any other artists work. It is a part of them, something taken from their very soul. Do not take this away from them, do not disrespect them so.
If you feel some sort of need to join this with your soul's out-poring, to add to your own work, ask them!
I would be happy to let others use my work; as long as it still is my work and due credit is given.
If you want to use something of mine, ask me and outline what it will be used for and I will give permission as long as what I contribute to it is credited as mine.
Thank you so much for that small courtesy.

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:iconthy-sun-himeko:
Nicely wirtten ^^

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At heart we're all self seeking and selfish Hearts are full of so much hate yet so much love to... Soiciety is what holds us together...
:iconredscreamingred:
Poetry is nothing if it isn't honest & this is beautiful...

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"Accept and live by only that which allows you to see truth face to face." ~ Budda
:iconcriondeighain:
absolutely lovely. i really enjoyed readingthis.

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"Oh how I meant to tease him
Oh how I meant no harm
Touching his back with my hand I kiss him
I see the wasp on the length of my arm..."
:iconemusonparole:
The flow in this is amazing, it reads like a whisper.

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For the same reason you can't see your nose on Thursdays.
:iconconnieflower:
Aaaah! I love it so much! It flows so nicely...:D
:icondelusion-of-habit:
thank u:)

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Revenge is Sweet; Dressed in Red
:icondelusion-of-habit:
I agree completely and thank u:D

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Revenge is Sweet; Dressed in Red
:icondelusion-of-habit:
thanks and im so glad you enjoyed it.

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Revenge is Sweet; Dressed in Red
:icondelusion-of-habit:
thank u, i like my poems to flow nicely otherwise they grate on my mind terribly. thank u, i think a whisper is the best medium for cmmunicating sumthing so close to ur heart.:)

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Revenge is Sweet; Dressed in Red

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